short messy story sketch. not a lot to it. practicing my writing, i think.

arrows/wsad/controller. (you really don't need a controller tho.)

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i love the type

I really want to know more, but I am also scared of knowing more. Very well done.


I'm now feeling a bit unsettled and will probably be thinking about this for a little while. It does just enough that I do and don't want to know more at the same time.

I just read The City & the City a couple of months ago, and I think I've seen you mention Miéville before, so I couldn't help but think of it, even if only the basic conceit is common between the two.


Thank you! Gosh, yes, I see the similarity - there's also, I think, some aphysical body horror from Miéville's other works that I can draw parallels to.

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Rereading my comment now, "basic conceit" seems totally inaccurate, I took a bunch of leaps that didn't even register at the time. I'm glad I did though, because now I'm even more excited to get into his other stuff!


I really enjoyed this messy, eerie story sketch! Would really like to see more out of this.